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| Great story. Excellent choice of words! Masterfully written, with a degree of formality, which further brought the images to life. I look forward to reading beyond the first chapter! |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: Barlow Posted Date: 2008-05-25 |
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| I read the first chapter and I want more! This chapter is a classic in the making and will be a major bestseller. Being a published author I can feel that this author is going to emerge from the crowd and become a mega-star. C Jones definitely catapults to the to of the competition for me. This is an "opus in the si-fi fantasy field"; the characters are larger than life, memorable and based on this one chapter I want more of this all-out epic adventure.
I just HAVE to download more - I think this alone says it all!!
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: rochelle moore Posted Date: 2008-05-21 |
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| what a great chapter |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: bamphett Posted Date: 2008-05-19 |
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| An intellectually stimulating chapter based on powerful ideas!
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: mattbrowne Posted Date: 2008-05-17 |
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| Brillant Book!! Couldn't put it down.Had me from the first page..the characters came alive and i fell in love with them..should be made into a movie!! |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: bec Posted Date: 2008-05-14 |
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| Absolutely incredible book! Very enjoyable and captivating. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: CastleQueen Posted Date: 2008-05-14 |
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| Brilliant book |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: MATTIE Posted Date: 2008-05-13 |
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| A wonderful read |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: musicman Posted Date: 2008-05-12 |
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| Although this is not my kind of book, it was compelling and well written. I would love to see it as a movie. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: PJ Schulman Posted Date: 2008-03-11 |
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| an excellent first chapter... loved it cant wait to read the whole thing... |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: shadowforest Posted Date: 2008-03-06 |
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| Great chapter and what imagination, the mixture of old and modern technology.
You really feel like you are becoming one of the author’s characters wishing them along threw the adventure. A must buy.
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: diamodol Posted Date: 2008-03-06 |
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| The first chapter captured my interest and I couldn't stop until the very last sentence of the entire book. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: MaryBeth Sparrow Posted Date: 2008-03-05 |
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| An interesting mix of technology with classic fantasy. Generally, a well written opening chapter, although at times the plot devices seem contrived. More dialog and less narrative would help the flow. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: ehrydberg Posted Date: 2008-03-05 |
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