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The Olympian |
| By: Peter Templeton Neale
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Dear Mr Neale I am writing to inform you about the qualities of your book, The Olympian. It was very enjoyable, and I'm sure it will be a giant success. The Olympian was indeed a brilliant tale. it had precise doses of action, emotion, and adventure. The sentences were perfectly built, and flowed into one another, like a tributary into a river. I'm sure that people would read it over and over again just to refresh their minds with your fascinating story. I very much liked the mystery of the void and the diamonds, and most certainly was happily surprised by many a twist. The characters were so realistic they could of actually existed. I loved the way you get into their emotions and show their feeling with description. I very much enjoyed the part where it got complicated because there were 2 Joeys. And it was clever how you turned Ivo into their other cat, plus the belief room was ingenious. I wish I had one! The only problem with your superb book is that once I didn’t get why a word was in the place it was. Other than that it was totally flawless. Over all your book is impeccable and, if I were a publisher, would pay £1000 for The Olympian. Thankyou for letting me read it.
Yours truly Daniel |
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