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| This first chapter is griping, integrating and at times emotionally challenging. I bought the full book after reading it. I have not read the full book yet but so far the characters and the story have entranced me. This is one of the best mysteries I have read in a while. her next book is eagerly awaited. The only thing holding back this writer is time. Watch this space. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: denismulvey Posted Date: 2008-05-17 |
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| The aurthor has a great imagination.The people that were created are so vivid. Can't wait to read the whole book. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: bmw325 Posted Date: 2008-05-16 |
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| The reaction of the main character finding the body of her boyfriend to the murder is a little underestimated and can be build on.We review of past relationships is overpowering and maybe can be mingled with flashes of reality to spice it up and add to the suspense.THe character descriptions need to be reviewed possible by painting some extreme characters and getting our imagination fired up more.Keep up the journey. I applaud your break into the world of thrillers |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: myself Posted Date: 2008-04-01 |
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| At last a murder mystery that has me hooked from the start. Can't wait to read the rest of it. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: fionaoh Posted Date: 2008-03-25 |
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| Reading the first chapter, definitely leaves you wanting more !!. |
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Comments for: First chapter Posted By: Kim Posted Date: 2008-03-25 |
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